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Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday



Another Six Sentence Sunday is upon us. I've decided to stick with Total Apocalypse of the Heart. Yes, I'm going with it! The comments from last week sealed it for me so thank you. This week I'm taking you right where we left off with Sam.

He missed that obnoxious, fire-engine red hair of hers and the devious grin she always wore right before she was about to cause trouble. His little thrill seeker. He wondered how much she’d changed over the last two years.

After seeing the news reports on the chaos in Atlanta, he wanted—no needed—to know if she was okay. He hoped Bea and Jim had been in contact with her, and she’d made it home before things had gotten out of control.

The loud crack of gunshots shook him from his thoughts.


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29 comments:

  1. MisaMarch 13, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    Oh, very intriguing! Nice tension as well.

    (Absolutely love the title, too!)

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  2. Sarah GrimmMarch 13, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    Love your title! And what a fantastic six! Do we get more next week?

    ~Sarah

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  3. Ella DrakeMarch 13, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    Eeep. Gun shots! I'm waiting to see what happens!

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  4. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    Well yep, I'm pulled in again this week. Love the title, love the concept. Now is it available somewhere or still a WIP?

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  5. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Pulled me right in! Hope everyone is okay.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Thank you. It's still a WIP.

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  7. Ann MayburnMarch 13, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Great POV on the leading man's feelings for the leading layd. :)

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  8. Gem SivadMarch 13, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    I'm hooked and will be back for more.

    Great six!

    gem

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  9. Liia Ann WhiteMarch 13, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Great six!

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  10. Laura KayeMarch 13, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Love his concern for her!

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  11. Stacey KennedyMarch 13, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    OOOO...intriguing! Nice six!

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  12. Lucy FelthouseMarch 13, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Awesome six! :)

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  13. Viviane BrentanosMarch 13, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Love the title and nice six

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  14. JessicaMarch 13, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    Great six. Love the title.

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  15. D. F. KriegerMarch 13, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Anything that describes hair as obnoxious is funny in my book. Nice six

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  16. Taryn KincaidMarch 13, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Definitely want to read more of this. Love the obnoxious, fire-engine red hair.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    All right-humor and then the axe falls. Good six.

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  18. UnknownMarch 13, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    Great six! Can't wait to read more.

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  19. Hailey EdwardsMarch 13, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    Ooooh, I like how you've redecorated the place.

    The title sounds awesome, and the snippet has me hooked.

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  20. sueMarch 13, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    intriguing - more please

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  21. Jessica E. SubjectMarch 13, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    Always intriguing! I look forward to this book being published.

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  22. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    Oh. I need to know more. Nice six!

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  23. LindsayMarch 13, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Captivating six.

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  24. Emily CaleMarch 13, 2011 at 3:34 PM

    Love the concern he has for her.

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  25. Lauri J OwenMarch 13, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    I suspect things are not going to be as he thinks they are. Great six!

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  26. Jayel KayeMarch 13, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    need to read more. Good six

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  27. Christine LondonMarch 13, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    'devious grin'...perhaps she has not changed that much. Great hook!
    Regards,
    Christine London

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  28. Pip GreenMarch 14, 2011 at 6:08 AM

    Loved the description of her, and that switch at the end from his inner musing to sudden action.

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  29. Marie DeesMarch 15, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    Nice. I get a great feel for her from this.

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